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Michael J Bird's Contribution to
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Out of the Unknown
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Out of the Unknown 4 Series making up 49 (60 minute) episodes 1965-71. Producer (1971) Alan Bromly Script editor Roger Parkes Michael J Bird had two stories produced in the fourth series. |
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In January 1970 the production team began the search for suitable scripts for a fourth, and final, series. Though a relative newcomer to BBC drama, Bird's work on Journey to the Unknown must have stood him in good stead and he submitted several story outlines. "The Intrusion" concerned a young newly married couple who buy an old rectory which turns out to be haunted. It ultimately became "To Lay A Ghost". Another, called "Rampage", told of the crew of a helicopter forced to land in the grounds of a remote private clinic where the lunatics have literally taken over the asylum. The crew release two attractive young women locked in a room believing them to be members of staff - but there are some who are far too dangerous for even their fellow patients to consider allowing them to run free! The record shows that in June 1970 Bird was commissioned to write a story called "Natural Break". Nothing more is known about it, but by the end of September he was completing "To Lay A Ghost", for which he received £650. (Around £5,000 at today's prices measured against the retail price index.) The original storyline for Bird's later contribution, "The Uninvited", was briefed in February 1971, just a couple of months before the fourth series began transmission. At this stage it was entitled "The Vision", and described as "A woman has a terrifying experience anticipating the future". A full scale script was then commissioned (then entitled "The Trunk") by which stage
it was clear it would feature a "suburban couple". The script was accepted the following month
(10th March) by which stage it was entitled 'The Uninvited". It was the last
Out of the Unknown production
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| TO LAY A GHOST |
| TO LAY A GHOST - PRODUCTION SCHEDULE |
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Producer - Alan Bromly Director - Ken Hannam Script Editor - Roger Parkes Designer - Fanny Taylor P.A. - John Bruce A.F.M. - Chris Cameron Assistant - Pat Carew T.M.1 - John Treaye T.M.2 - Ron Koplick Sound Supervisor - John Staple Costume Supervisor - Rita Reekie Make-up Supervisor - Sandra Hurll Vision Mixer - Leon Griffin Grams Operator - Linton Howell-Hughes Crew - Four Senior Cameraman - Reg Poulter Floor Assistant - Gerry Desmond |
STUDIO SCHEDULE - PROJECT NO: 2150/3858 Sunday, 28th February 1971 (TK 35 17.00-19.00) 16.00-19.00 Camera rehearsal 19.00-20.00 DINNER 20.00-22.00 Camera rehearsal Monday, 1st March 1971 11.00-12.00 Camera rehearsal 12.00-13.00 LUNCH 13.00-18.00 Camera rehearsal 18.00-19.00 DINNER 19.00-22.00 Camera rehearsal (TK 35 from 19.30) Tuesday, 2nd March 1971 11.00-13.00 Camera rehearsal 13.00-14.00 LUNCH 14.00-14.30 Line up 14.30-16.45 VT RECORD (VTC/6HT65146) 16.45-17.45 Camera line-up 17.45-19.00 VT RECORD (VTC/6HT/65146) |
| TO LAY A GHOST - REVIEWS |
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This episode is reviewed (very unfavourably) on the web by Nick Cooper in a feature called Time in Advance. Cooper grossly overstates a moderate point of criticism concluding " ... the subliminal message of this episode is so disgraceful that even for 1971 it seems incredible that anyone could have thought this nasty little piece of misogyny a fit subject for any form of dramatic presentation whatsoever ..." Olive Bird believes the double-entendre in the title was almost certainly intentional (not that the BBC would have realised it!) But neither she nor Michael were aware of any controversy caused by the episode - in point of fact, in 1971 the episode was universally praised by the critics. The BBC's Audience Research report contained very favourable reviews - many viewers felt it was a well developed and effectively "eerie" play which "gripped the attention" and "kept you on the edge all the way through". Others stated that it was one of the most enjoyable plays that they had seen. A minority found it somewhat "morbid", whilst a smaller sample disliked what was they described as "the unnecessary steamy bits". Some were unhappy regarding a climax that was "too vague and abrupt". |
John Lawrence reviewing the episode for "The Stage" on 6th May 1971 found it: "... an entertaining and well written play" Click for larger version of the full review.
(with thanks to Colin Cutler) |
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The Guardian's TV Critic, Peter Fiddick, wrote This was less like a product of E.A Poe's off days, more like the experience of para-psychological phenomenon you read about in the newspapers - and in some cases, I suppose, actually live through. A young bride, raped as a schoolgirl, moves into a new home in an old house and there stirs up the wandering spirit of - we gathered in the end - a nineteenth century murderer and rapist who had killed there. It was her husband who was frightened, and called in the psychic research boffin with his cameras: she, increasingly, was far from repelled by what she alone could see. Part good old-fashioned tingle, of course, but a good part seeming very real. You can't believe in ghosts any more. And this ghost-hunter - one of Peter Barkworth's jokey, affable impersonations - was a psychiatrist who saw little difference in principle between his patient's mind and haunted houses. We have had the documentary approach to this ESP business from time to time and if this is actually going to spin over into fiction it's long overdue. The play was glossily set, a bit after Antonioni, and directed by Ken Hannam with relaxed precision and a nice willingness to have a go at stretching the visual bounds of the medium with technical effects. A bit undercast though: Ian Gregory and Lesley-Anne Down had the right innocence for the young beautiful people (he a photographer, natch) but, she especially, at the expense of a certain stiffness." |
Michael Le Moignan wrote a lengthy review in "The Australian" on 27th November 1973: "... Michael J Bird's tight economic script maintained a fine balance between the young couple's fear and love." ![]() Click for larger version of the full review.
(with thanks to Colin Cutler) |
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POINTS OF INTEREST
Bird was to "recycle" the character name Dr Phillimore many years later in his BBC drama series The Dark Side of the Sun. |
| THE UNINVITED |
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THE UNINVITED
George Pattison and his wife are middle people - income, age and class. Their imaginations are as conformist and limited as their daily lives. The one thing they have found that they can hold onto in this shifting world is each other; indeed their closeness even extends to a sort of mental telepathy.
It came as a considerable blow when George's company decided to give him a three-years overseas posting - a blow climaxing in their last night in the flat. All their furniture is in store, apart from a divan; both of them are nervous about the long journey ahead; their neighbours are insisting on wishing them luck with indigestible Spanish champagne.....
It is George who has the first hallucination: one moment the flat is bare, the next full of strange, out-moded furniture, then empty again. He tries to ignore it. But then Millie pops along to make sure they have cleared every last thing out of the hall cupboard only to come back half fainting because of the odd trunk in there - a trunk in which she had found the body of a dead woman. Then, when George runs to look, the cupboard is empty again.
They do their best to reasure [sic] each other, agree they are both imagining things. They get into bed but neither can sleep. Before long Millie is up for some water. Her scream brings George running to the sitting room - where all that strange furniture is suddenly back again and with daylight suddenly streaming in through the windows. And worse, an ill-tempered and frightening man emerges from the shadows to talk to them. At least, it seems that way until he calls them by other names and they realise that they are caught up in some terrifying dream. And then the poor woman whom Millie had seen dead in the trunk walks into the room.
(Text of BBC Enterprises sales documentation)
POINTS OF INTEREST
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| THE UNINVITED - PRODUCTION SCHEDULE |
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Producer - Alan Bromly Director - Eric Hills Script Editor - Roger Parkes Designer - John Burrowes P.A. - Jenny Macarthur A.F.M. - Jean Esslemont Assistant - Joan Elliott Floor Assistant - Gerry Desmond T.M.1 - Nigel Wright T.M.2 - Jack Walsh Sound Supervisor - Colin Dixon Grams Operator - Nick Jones Vision Mixer - Fred Law Crew - 4 Costume Supervisor - Rupert Jarvis Make-up Supervisor - Cecile Hay-Arthur Visual Effects - Jim Ward Graphics - Charles McGhie Props - Magda Olendar Film Cameraman - Peter Sargent Film Editor - Bob Ryner |
STUDIO T.C.3 SATURDAY, 22ND MAY 1971 (rehearse) 16.00-19.00 Camera rehearsal 19.00-20.00 DINNER 20.00-22.00 Camera rehearsal SUNDAY, 23RD MAY 1971 (rehearse) 14.30-18.45 Camera rehearsal 18.45-19.45 DINNER 19.45-22.00 Camera rehearsal (with TK.41) MONDAY, 24TH MAY 1971 (rehearse/record) 10.30-13.30 Camera rehearsal (with TK.37 from 11.00) 13.30-14.30 LUNCH 14.30-15.00 Sound and vision line up 15.00-19.00 Telerecord VTC/6HT/66676 VT EDITING: C900-16.00 on 27th/28th May TRANSMISSION; (Wk.25) Wednesday, 23rd June 1971 9.20pm |
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